A WEEKEND WITHOUT TECHNOLOGY
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A WEEKEND WITHOUT TECHNOLOGY
This weekend I left all my electronic devices (phone, computer, tablet) to see how dependent I am on these devices. At first it seems to be very difficult because I do everything with my phone and computer, but is actually easier than I thought.
It's Saturday I'm tidying up my room and helping at home since the morning, nothing interesting. Is the night now and l'm listening to music through my discman without the need to use my phone, also I'm writing songs and drawing different things in a notebook.
It's finally Sunday, I think today is more complicated not to use my phone because I don't have nothing to do at home. So now I'm making figures with clay, I'm trying to do something like incense holders or animals. then, t's time to paint the figures I made but I don't think i'm good enough at paiting. After some hours I finish with the clay and at this moment I'm organizing my favorite albums of my cd's collection and decorating my desk, also I play with my cats. this weekend was so fast and good because I spend those two days busy and doing things I enjoy.
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Mariana
ResponderEliminarThis blog is supposed to be written using SIMPLE PRESENT AND PRESENT CONTINUOUS, not past.
Double check spelling and puntuation marks.
Pronoun I is always a capital letter
Regards
Miss Carla
Mariana
ResponderEliminarNicely Done!
Remember that after BUT, you need to use a subject: IT IS actually....
IS THE NIGHT NOW instead I would have used: IT IS NIGHT TIME......
I DON'T HAVE NOTHING TO DO could be better, in English is not possible to use two negatives together in one sentence. Use: I don't have anything to do / I don' have much to do / I have nothing to do.
After a period, remember to use a capital letter
Pronoun I is always a capital letter
The best option is: I am also playing with my cats...
Regards
Miss Carla